viernes, 28 de enero de 2011

Problem

Noise Pollution

Dear editor of  El Piñero de la Cuenca

Original
I'm writing this letter because your means of communication is much contaminate because contaminate with sound is a contaminate much dangerous and i don't like it.
Is very important inform, for hate contact with the events of world, but irritant for the people.
 
With  help of partner

I'm a client of you newspaper, this letter is about the level of stress your sellers use, you contaminate the city with your horrible sound i don't have a problem of your paper but i don't like it.

2 comentarios:

  1. It was fun to compare the two letters side-by-side.

    What do you think about this work you did? Can you add a reflection, please? I promise to give you more points...

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  2. Fine i think that my class of englihs it's good and i'm thinking of the writing of mine works in class are goood and i'm learn much with the form of teach of my teacher. jejejeje!!!!!

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